I plan to do a lot of things to this draft. I will make sure that I check for any sentence that may not make sense or may even have errors. I have learned how to make a good essay. In other words, when I look at an essay I have to make sure I am looking for errors that I did not know how to look before. For example, I will look for fragment sentences because if I use a comma wrong it can cause a fragment sentence. I will work on this essay the entire weekend. I will make sure I look at my my essay everyday and focus on one thing at a time. This will help me not feel to over whelmed but at the same time I am getting a lot of work done. When the class had a writing workshop I decided to focus more on comma usage and sentence structure. I choose to focus more about these two topics because I know I have a lot of issues with errors on those two things. I focused one where I have to use a comma and where a semi colon needs to be used.The tutors helped me with my comma usage and they helped me by making sure I did not have any run on sentences or even fragments. They pointed out when I wrote a sentence that did not make since. Also, I learned that when writing your not supposed to have to many ideas in one sentence because then that is how run on sentences start.