With all of the feed back I got on my essay I will first plan to make my conclusion a little longer. I already reached 500 words for my essay but I still feel I need to say more to end off my essay. My group members did point out to me that I did not use any headers. So in my final I will make sure I use a header with my name, my teachers and the date and everything I am supposed to have. I also have to use better transition words. For example, words like first, second because in my essay I really did not use many of them. My thesis statement was good and detailed also my topic sentences. Yes I will add to my checklist about when to use are/is because that was always a problem for me but now since we had a class on it I feel stronger in choosing the correct one for my essay. Everything else is pretty much good. My plan is to start looking over my essay now and not wait until the last minute. Waiting for the last minute will only cause my essay to be unpolished. Also, I will use all my time over the weekend to focus on all the things we talk about in class. For example, making sure everything is organized, there are no spelling mistakes and things of that sort. This class has been a big help so far and now when I am looking over my essay I found myself looking for the right mistakes.