Most of the comments I had were all about grammar mistakes and even things like my essay title was not creative enough. I struggle with grammar, that is my weak point and I have already learned that. I am not good at spelling or using commas and grammatical symbols. Sometimes I even if I write an easy on word Microsoft  I have to get someone to prof read my work because I always have spelling issues.  Another, issue I have is that I do not always use the right verb tenses. I tend to flip and flop between had, and has and were and was because I never know which one to use. Also, sometimes when I write Microsoft Word will not say a word is wrong because it is a word in a the dictionary, however it is not the right word to go in my sentence. For example, sometimes I mean to say board but I end up saying broad. Some of my sentences did not make since to my classmates but when I was rereading my essay to myself it did not sound like nothing was wrong with it but when my group read it they said it was a little confusion. It is going to be very hard for me to try to fix my grammar issues because in my mind I think it is right but it is not. I need a lot of practice on spelling and I have to read more in order to improve on the problem I am having in writing. Also, I need to take more time to look over my essay because my content in my essay are always good, however my grammar is not always on point.